Are you happy...? I'm gone... And forever.
Gone away - without slamming the door.
I don't care,
I don't care,
I don't care...
Any more...
I enjoyed our being together,
Now my loneliness creeps on the floor.
I'm not scared,
I'm not scared,
I'm not scared...
Any more...
Empty room, only silence surrounds me,
I sit, stupidly watching the door...
I'm not needed,
I'm not needed,
I'm not needed...
Any more...
Any More
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It could be a song... don't you agree?
How about "slamming" instead of "clapping"?
Nice work! Keep going.
Беляева Дина 13.02.2009 00:09 • Заявить о нарушении
How about "slamming" instead of "clapping"?
Nice work! Keep going.
Беляева Дина 13.02.2009 00:09 • Заявить о нарушении
thnx a lot, Dina. Yes, i'm thinking about writing music to that poem - no any idea yet...-)))))))) About slamming... Clapping seemed to me more hard, like a thunder... And clapping sounds like a click... May u're right... But i've chosen this word. Do u speak english without accent?-))))))))
with endless warmth -
Конечно -Нет 15.02.2009 03:21 Заявить о нарушении
with endless warmth -
Конечно -Нет 15.02.2009 03:21 Заявить о нарушении
I do have an accent, as anyone else who were immersed in the other language environment after puberty.
Беляева Дина 15.02.2009 22:24 Заявить о нарушении
Беляева Дина 15.02.2009 22:24 Заявить о нарушении
Check out the dictionary entry for "slam", especially #2
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/slam[3]
Беляева Дина 15.02.2009 22:25 Заявить о нарушении
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/slam[3]
Беляева Дина 15.02.2009 22:25 Заявить о нарушении