the brittle breeze is breeding in a brisk brook
her brevity of breathing broadens to the brink
but she’s a bridled bronco and her bristled brood
are perky waves a slew of endless blinks
brief moments leaf through breviaries of brownish clouds
and browsing for the breaking news from breakout thoughts
from braising brains in brandy brands from after-doubts
and bringing that in broken English for riddling with inkblots
the brittle breeze is slamming on the brakes of dreams
and broken hearts like bran and brackish briny hooch
the rest is broached and bribed by brindled brighten themes
displayed in bronze outside the oblate solid brooch
February 5, 2009
Copyright ©2009 Iouri Lazirko
Brrr
© Copyright: Юрий Лазирко, 2009
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This is really funny and original poem, I am quite impressed. With Dina#s remarks it looks good, but your idea is splendid. With I could use my English in such an interesting way! Very good. Irina
Ирина Фетисова-Мюллерсон 26.03.2009 22:53 • Заявить о нарушении
Ирина Фетисова-Мюллерсон 26.03.2009 22:53 • Заявить о нарушении
Hi Irina,
I am glad you found the time to absorb it as a piece of fun. It was certainly entertaining to write it as well.
Thank you,
Iouri
:)
Юрий Лазирко 27.03.2009 18:36 Заявить о нарушении
I am glad you found the time to absorb it as a piece of fun. It was certainly entertaining to write it as well.
Thank you,
Iouri
:)
Юрий Лазирко 27.03.2009 18:36 Заявить о нарушении
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