I was not born to please yourself

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I was not born to please yourself
I am a book from other shelf
You better know that this is real
I live and sleep with who I feel
I won't stand for your advice
For halfened life, for compromise
I've made my choice, I came for more
And YOU are standing at the door
You are pathetic, self-absorbed
With poisoned mind and bitter word
Remember- I will draw my sword
And when I do- we do- you fall
For you the world is getting small
I'll sing my song and dance my dance
On your gravestone, I'll take this chance

I'll kiss her lips and hold her hand
But you...
you'd never understand

Посвящается всем, кому ненавистны гомофобы и их узкое мышление
(и в частности всем друзьям Большого Бэнни)
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And YOU are standing at the door

This phrase will work well with the idiom or an allusion to the idiom "to come out" (come out of the closet = confess in homosexual orientation). A small change in the preceding phrase may just do the trick.

I've made my choice, I HIDE NO more
And YOU are standing at the door

Nice work! Also I admire your courage to stand up to bigots.

P.S. graveyard >> gravestone

Беляева Дина 29.01.2009 10:23 • Заявить о нарушении

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Dear Dina
Thank you for your advice and support. This poem wasn't really about coming out itself, but with your permition I will use your gravestone suggestion.
Kind regards
Natalya

Последняя Порция 29.01.2009 15:28 Заявить о нарушении

Natalya,
With pleasure.
Best,
Dina

Беляева Дина 29.01.2009 15:33 Заявить о нарушении

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