Early morning today is majestically bright
Even though it`s the end of the fall
Every object around is penetrated by light
And the Sun is the master of all
Everywhere is sparkling, even dew on the grass
Stream of light is dispersed by the willow
And one ray breaking through window glass
Comes and rests by your face on the pillow
R-A
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This is a beutiful poem.
I relly like it
Every object around is penetrated by light (We cannot omit verbs in English :))
You do not need a comma after "ray".
Respectfully,
Vadim
Сам Вадим 25.01.2009 17:44 • Заявить о нарушении
I relly like it
Every object around is penetrated by light (We cannot omit verbs in English :))
You do not need a comma after "ray".
Respectfully,
Vadim
Сам Вадим 25.01.2009 17:44 • Заявить о нарушении