Campfire...

As far as at Ancient Stone Ages –
But May be and Even Before -
A Dream After All was in Persons –
How Quicker to Reach -  the Whole…

At That Time He Strived in a Cave–
And Campfire at Entry There Blazed… 
He Wanted the Faith  in His Love  -
For Ever Should Be There Warmed…
 
The Epoch Changed Epoch, and  Now
Campfire Isn’t More  in  Needs…
Look there,   the  Bright Searchlight… How
Illuminates Road and Leads…


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Quite right, Gavriil! Let Poetry be the candle in the night...

With best wishes,
Valery

Валерий Шувалов   30.12.2008 00:02     Заявить о нарушении
Thank You for very interesting review!
My best wishes to You!

Sincerely, Gavriil

Гавриил Иваниченко   30.12.2008 00:11   Заявить о нарушении