Senses

Do you see a big yellow warning?

You should stop and look around

You must have forgot about something

Something that still have not found…

       

It is not easy to get out of this maze

To break all your rules and change the place

To find that peculiar thing

You think you need it to believe…that you should “Be”!

       

You need special sense to live

“Sense of Life”…it’s so relative

Don’t make guesses what it should be

Life itself can make you feel!

       

You got so much trouble on your mind

You feel completely deaf and blind

You need this sense to feel alive

While walking down your road of life

       

It is a vital thing to feel the juice

Passion for life… that only you can choose!

And no matter how long your road will be

You’ll feel alive and never feel dee

       

People are looking for senses of everything

The whole life…till death

But they forgot the time is passing

And they just don’t see what lies beneath…..their eyes

       


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Wow!!! It sounds unusual!!!! But in general, i like it)))
By the way, do you know that there are small problems with rhythm??)))

Маша Мурашова   17.10.2008 18:13     Заявить о нарушении
=) Your first words made the impression that you don't like unusual things,...

Frankly speaking, not)

Firstly, it was a song. But I rewrote it...owing to some reasons. It seems to me that I've told you about it..?

Рия Корс   19.10.2008 20:38   Заявить о нарушении
No!! I like unusual things, but I some kind of don't trust them sometimes!!!
It was a song? then, sorry!! I haven't heard about it before)

Маша Мурашова   20.10.2008 08:16   Заявить о нарушении
=) But I agree with you. The rhythm is on one's jack here. But it should be so.

Рия Корс   20.10.2008 14:37   Заявить о нарушении
And by the way, it is not a problem at all))

Рия Корс   20.10.2008 14:38   Заявить о нарушении