Does anybody care?

Does anybody care
what I have on my mind?
Does anybody care
What I feel deep inside?

Does anybody care
Why things are not that bright?
Does anybody care
Why I can't sleep at night?

Does anybody care
If they can see my tear?
Does anybody care
If I just disappear?

Does anybody care
If I fall ill or die?
Does anybody care?...
... They don't. They're not obliged.


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- what I have in my mind
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Уръия   19.05.2011 18:00     Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо!

Леди Маргарита   20.05.2011 14:42   Заявить о нарушении
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