nothing stay

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nobody will be too close to me
please, never go out from here
don`t disappear
only pulsation of heart
city`s polluted air in lungs
be noize of rain on the roads
drop of rain in my palms
shine of gems in the rings
in silver rainy asphalted

I keep in my mind
snowfall overhead
white planes that dissolve
in snowly sky overhead
sky over airport
white planes that dissolve
and melt
in the sea of the rain
between two capitals in the rains

like the submerged ships
under water in depth
save me from my loneliness
that`s so long miles
that`s all my life long
I dessolve
so alone
the water swamps my eyes
because throught the wind
my fingers so numb
the words imprisoned in throat
I choke with cigarette smoke
this splendid autumn is cold
so alone

touch the cloudy sky
feel that I`m close by..
my insomnia like street lamps
on your road tonight
in dark sky overhead
still remains
so far
be my anaesthesia
and reflection in glasses of wine
save me from my loneliness
nothing stay here tonight
only our loneliness
only our loneliness