Serenity Storm

Like a shadow, you came out of the rain -
Ghostly creature of different world,
And you've managed to save me from me
With a quietly whispered word.

So, trembling, I give myself up to your mercy,
I never really thought I would dare.
My tiptoes are barely touching the ground -
I'm walking, so free, in the air...

I'm staring at you for what seems like forever,
My mind is so clouded with haze...
A breath is suddently caught in my chest,
When I meet your fiery gaze.

Your coal-black mane is your dark halo,
Your cloak's like wings in a raging gust,
An iron hand in a velvet glove
Is outstratched to me in a sign of trust.

You are the power of the whirlwind,
That lives this life a human form.
You are my perfect midnight angel,
My safe heaven, my serenity storm...


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Your poem is very romatic and beautiful!It creates vivid mental image!
Wish You good luck,
Di

Диана Давоян   15.06.2008 14:14     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much vor your kind words))) I'm really glad you liked it))
FM

Марина Фордвэкс   15.06.2008 15:34   Заявить о нарушении