June 12, 2008
It should have finished long ago.
But still it didn't go like that.
And now I see: you've grabbed my soul -
You've stolen what I thought was mine...
Just tell me why you need all that?
You are not mine, and I'm not yours...
Why weren't you punished for this crime?
Because of you my mind I lost!
You left, but didn't let me go...
Betrayed, but tried to ask my pardon...
And still you haven't come back home,
Staying in some another garden...
Your time is up! You lost this game!
And I can stand all that no longer!
I don't like going on this way...
And now I changed... And now I'm stronger!
I am Stronger
© Copyright: Юлия Бачурина, 2008
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Very good poem,especially I would like to underline the last line.It's very otmistic:
"And now I changed... And now I'm stronger!"
With warmth and best wishes,
Di
Диана Давоян 15.06.2008 14:26 • Заявить о нарушении
"And now I changed... And now I'm stronger!"
With warmth and best wishes,
Di
Диана Давоян 15.06.2008 14:26 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks, Diana! I've never written my poems so fast as I wrote this one. There's no special idea, but it's better to say there's some reaction.
Юлия Бачурина 15.06.2008 20:28 Заявить о нарушении
Юлия Бачурина 15.06.2008 20:28 Заявить о нарушении
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