Artificial love

I'd like to taste your sweets,
They were designed to feed my lust.

I want to play this game
And more, and more, and more, and more.
I want to feel the burst
Explode, explode, explode, explode!
And I shall feed my hunger
I'll take you even harder,
To break the new dimension gates.

I'll show you outer space
Enjoy the moment fall in grace

Hotter faster sweeter harder

I want to play this game
And more, and more, and more, and more.
I want to feel the burst
Explode, explode, explode, explode!
Don't say me, that you love me,
Just listen to your body
Set free your primitive instincts.

Check out for your cash
And break out your hungers
Choose one that you like,
Pay. And enjoy your power.
Choose the way that you like
And she will obey
To feed your demand
Of the Artificial love
Your desires unleashed!
Your desires unleashed!

I want to play this game
And more, and more, and more, and more.
I want to feel the burst
Explode, explode, explode, explode!
I want to play this game
And more, and more, and more, and more.
I want to feel the burst
Explode, explode, explode, explode!


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P.S. написано обалденно.
Я сегодня весь день напевала припев :)

Ольга Малиёва   02.04.2009 22:53     Заявить о нарушении
I like to… taste your… sweets,
It was designed… to… feed my lust.
В первом предложение несогласование чисел. Либо "sweet", либо "they were" ;)
С теплом,

Ольга Малиёва   05.04.2009 16:29   Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо. Учту :-)

Илья Корнейчук   16.04.2009 23:12   Заявить о нарушении