What Is Love?

I look into your eyes.
My hand sleeps on your arm.
This evening is so nice.
I feel your magic charm.

Temptation is like dire,
When you make love with me.
My pure heart on fire,
My soul`s as deep as sea.

The sun shines for us on the sky.
We can see small white dove.
If I cry, when you say me “Bye”,
It mean, that I`m in love.


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oh, I tell you, it's exciting! great piece of poetry!

but if you let me, I will say some words about grammar, "in the sky", "when you say bye" (without me), and "it means"...)

but anyway, poem is really good)

I wish You well!
Olezka;)

Олег Ардатов   01.06.2008 14:33     Заявить о нарушении