I Wish

I wish you never had to go away
The sky gets grey
I wish we never had to be apart
It breaks my heart

I wish I never had to say goodbye
I cry
I wish I never had to be alone
And stoned

I wish you never had to hide your smile
Just shine!


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и вот, пришла я и все испортила :-)

My sun is just for you, my Love
My smile shines for you. above
the heaven and beyond the sky...
do not be scared of goodbye -
It's just a meaningless and simple word.
the empty parting layer between the people's empty worlds.

you're not alone until you have your soul.
you know, my Love, the rest is fucking role!

I wish my English is not so bad.
You understand me? Fine!
So, go ahead!
and clear up your soul from rime.
always me, Nora

Нора Амора   28.03.2008 00:23     Заявить о нарушении
Aye, maybe yer English is even a wee bit better than mine )

I'd just correct "you're not alone untill you have a soul" - "you're not alone as long as you've soul"

Cheers

Роман Ким   28.03.2008 07:12   Заявить о нарушении
"as long as you've A soul" )))

Роман Ким   28.03.2008 07:13   Заявить о нарушении
heh :-) how modest you are!

Thanx!
without offence, I hope? :-)

always me

Нора Амора   28.03.2008 11:46   Заявить о нарушении
no offence at all!

Роман Ким   28.03.2008 13:00   Заявить о нарушении
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