Happy New Year

The year is coming to the end,
So don't be sad and don't be sloppy,
Remember, that we live on land,
Don't be afraid when you are happy.

We should forgive today eacn other,
For everything we did in past,
Believe that will be year another,
This will be not for us the last.

Remember, that is Santa coming,
To everybody who believes,
That no more war and no more bombing,
Just many spaces for forgives.

Let Christmas tree to bring us luck,
We light the light and bring the spirit,
To having mercy in the sock,
For everybody who can feel it.

I wish you happiness, my friends,
Salute to you with glass of wine,
I hope that frienship never ends,
My friends you always will be mine.


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I really liked your verse, Osya. From the point of view of the contents, it's very warm and human. Perhaps some minor grammar and style problems - but never mind, it will all come with the time.

Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year to you (or rather - vice versa).

Valery

Валерий Шувалов   04.01.2008 12:11     Заявить о нарушении
Привет, Валерочка!
Как говорится, английский ещё не выучили, а русский стали забывать.
Спасибо за рецензию.
С теплом, Оля Некрасова.

Ося Некрасова   05.01.2008 02:44   Заявить о нарушении
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