Marine

Хэлен Маклин
So different no one could be:
so beautiful - sometimes so weird.
so often shy - but so direct.
so independent, u can say.

She's so unusual - although
this mixture isn't so unique..
I'll tell u, girl, if u don't know -
The Happiness is just the same!

So all ingredients you've got
to be as happy as one can.
You make the happiness yourself -
I know, you will succeed, my friend!!

...
I know the secret of her luck..
In fact, a very fancy thing!..

She walks this Earth,
She burns this Fire,
She breath's this Air,
 She is Marine!


© Copyright: Хэлен Маклин, 2007
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Let me not to point some grammatical mistakes.
You will find them by yourself after a careful reading.
Somewhat other.
I catch the great pleasure reading your verses.
You have your personal style. Not in the poetic form -
it seems to be too early. But just in the percehtion
of the life. You are gaily even if you write abjut something not too happy.
Your muse gives joy.
About just this poem. You may see on me page the
verses "Four Aristotl's Elements" You will find some
senses which are common.

Thank you. Not only you but your poetry as well are
beautiful.

Yours V.K.

Владимир Кошкин   05.04.2008 18:25   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Great thanks ! nothing else can be added ) i'm afraid everything u said is true ...

=)

Хэлен Маклин   07.04.2008 21:08   Заявить о нарушении
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