The Dawn

I've met the dawn in a rainy day.
The fog over the road has gone.
Dark clouds are hurring somewhere today.
Town houses are staying so lone.

The cub is hovering road slowly
Fatigued driver, cigarette's smoke.
The trees are noisy, reeling so foully.
The wind is rocking a lock.

It's a morning already... It's dawning...
I'm looking forward in such a long way.
And my apathetic stare is catching
Flaring light of the lamp far away.

(с) Kivlov, 28.06.2006


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It is so nice to meet people who feel nature and write aesthetically like you do!Your poem is really fascinating!Hope it will not be the last one!I wish you good luck in composing numerous beautiful poems!With warmth,Diana!

Диана Давоян   07.10.2007 20:44     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you a lot! I thought no one can estimate such poetry...

Кивлов   08.10.2007 20:15   Заявить о нарушении