Palpable

My sweetheart,
Tonight I saw something I had never seen before.
I saw our love, in all its beauty,
Right in front of our eyes.

Standing in the circle holding hands
With us and our friends,
Giving us strength and hope.

My darling,
It was so close I could feel its warmth
So real I could touch its cloth…

We’ve always known it was there,
That our love was in the air
But tonight it came down to us.

Did you know it’s much bigger than our pain?
Did you know it’s much louder than the rain?
Did you see it too?

I can’t deny I still have fear,
But feeling our love so near,
So palpable I hear its beat,
Makes the circle complete.


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So romantic,sentimental,inspiring,emotional and fascinating!Your poem is really nice!Hope you will always feel the beautiful feeling which is called love and it will warm your soul for ever!Good luck!With respect,Diana!

Диана Давоян   02.10.2007 00:03     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for your kind comment, Diana!

Оленка Б   04.10.2007 23:55   Заявить о нарушении