Life is withering illusion

Life is withering illusion,
Life appears and fades away,
All that`s left is just confusion,
That engulfs the mortal`s way.
Hearts are broken, words are spoken,
The last word the Death will say,
All that see no worth in living,
Tremble before Death in dismay!


Рецензии
As one of my favourite guitar-players said: Life's nothig! Death's just the beginning! I'm develishly impressed with so vividly coloured verses! They're as brief and so capacious as the stroke of HER Scythe...Anyway...Well DONE!!!

Сергей Райда   30.08.2007 22:23     Заявить о нарушении
I thank you.I wrote this sitting on a bench in a park, wrote it on my mobile phone.It just came to me, so it has not been corrected in any way.I rarely change something in my rimes...
Good luck!

Белая Ушастик-Путаник   31.08.2007 09:10   Заявить о нарушении
Fucking yes!

Скоморокс   02.09.2007 20:26   Заявить о нарушении