your image is sensual

you reflect in little sudden sparks
the image is brightened, light, lime
but buttery
and vague

however, i can speak
about the position of your legs
and the distance betwen the floor and your head

your image is sensual

soon the sparks fade.
so does the reflection.

since now your image is noting but
a slight reverie
over the details that one retains in the memory
because they are outstanding
nervously outstanding


i amuse in the train
playing with this memory

my hands are but my palms


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Ты влюблена? Это видно... Объект твоего чувства, наверняка, тоже необычный человек. Очень красивое стихотворение...
Ты не пробовала писать на шведском?

Анна Шидловска   24.06.2007 12:21     Заявить о нарушении
ett trad branner i min sjal...
ya eche ne ochen hororsho znayu shwedskiy chtoby pisat na nem...
no eta steochka kotoraya risha mne w golowu, kazhetsya , horosho otrazhaet, sostoyanie

Сильви Вархола   25.06.2007 08:37   Заявить о нарушении