You will be mine

In front of the massive door
Your heavy steps could be heard.
I really can hold it no more,
I let tears out- they hurt...

Please, enter whatever it takes,
I wanna feel fusion with you
And also feel breath on my face-
Can say what I want being mute...

Can make you have hunger for more.
I tell you, I’m giving you all.
Please, enter, please, enter the door-
Without your love I’m so small...

You captured my mind when we met.
I’m crazy, I’m crazy for you.
You blame me for it, I know that,
But I don’t regret being mewed...

You put me to prison of love,
You think I will rot on the stalk?!
You’re wrong, honey! Know that I’m tough
And strong, and as high as a rock...

I’ll get you, I’ll get one day
And have you with me by my side!
Be sure, I mean what I say-
So swallow your excessive pride!

I’ll make you all mine, you’ll see!
I’ll gain in this battle of love-
I know that I have a strong creed.
We’ll see who will lose and who’ll laugh...


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I don't think that it's love when somebody loses and another one laughs.
But still some moments of your poetry make a good impression.
Nice to meet you.

rgds,

P.S.
perhaps you wanted to say: "youR heavy steps" and "can say THAT I want being mute..."

Дэнн Фенциклидин   16.06.2007 10:40     Заявить о нарушении
thanks for corrections: yes "youR heavy steps" but "can say WHAT I want being mute..."

Any way, love can be both mutual and also causing one`s broken, bleeding, hurt heart. This is from my experience

Марина Соколова   17.06.2007 21:26   Заявить о нарушении
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