We're lonely together, people!
Resting peace rests in peace today.
Our weapon is shout that ripples,
our freedom that sways away.
Please don't tell me – you are in heaven,
no one's buying your lullaby.
I'm not counting this week to seven,
this is my time to say Goodbye.
Without walking to measure distance
from a glass to the thirsty lips
God’s relentlessly drinks His instance.
Souls are tart, when the heaven sips.
December 12, 2007
Iouri Lazirko
Copyright ©2007 Iouri Lazirko
We are lonely together
© Copyright: Юрий Лазирко, 2007
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Oh, that "loneliness amidst the crowd"! Do You still feel the same?
Агната 04.02.2009 21:38 • Заявить о нарушении
Агната 04.02.2009 21:38 • Заявить о нарушении
Sometimes I do.
That was my first Eglish-written verse by the way.
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 02:30 Заявить о нарушении
That was my first Eglish-written verse by the way.
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 02:30 Заявить о нарушении
You see: I have started reading You from the very beginning)
Do You speak Spanish as well?
Агната 05.02.2009 11:20 Заявить о нарушении
Do You speak Spanish as well?
Агната 05.02.2009 11:20 Заявить о нарушении
Claro, seсorita. Hablo espaсol. Pero mi espaсol no es lo suficientemente bueno para escribir poemas.
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 19:40 Заявить о нарушении
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 19:40 Заявить о нарушении
Ooops,
For some reason stixira doesn't like some Spanish letters and converts it to "c".
Thet is why "senorita" with Spanish "n'" became "secorita" and so on.
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 19:44 Заявить о нарушении
For some reason stixira doesn't like some Spanish letters and converts it to "c".
Thet is why "senorita" with Spanish "n'" became "secorita" and so on.
Юрий Лазирко 05.02.2009 19:44 Заявить о нарушении
Unfortunately, I know just a few Spanish words and cannot take part in this nice conversation) My second non-native language is German which is not far as good as my English. Basically, I can just read it, though "без словаря" - the fact I am very proud of)
Агната 05.02.2009 20:36 Заявить о нарушении
Агната 05.02.2009 20:36 Заявить о нарушении
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