Cross me out if I’m amiss.
Crossing is the same as killing.
Overdraw the Judas' kiss
with a petal left of peeling.
Crossing is like slashing face.
Crossing is like crucifying.
Outlined soul gets cut then paste.
Watch me out! A man is dying,
and your mind is clear, as pain.
Maybe, once the cross is vivid,
place your checkmark next to 'vain'.
Nothing's crossing mind, but livid
ashy-slushy-colored visage.
January 10, 2007
Iouri Lazirko
Copyright ©2007 Iouri Lazirko
Crossing out
© Copyright: Юрий Лазирко, 2007
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I just like to watch how Your professional background, or, namely, Your technical lexis, suggests new meanings. "cut... then paste" in respect of a human being sounds very expressive!
Агната 06.02.2009 13:20 • Заявить о нарушении
Агната 06.02.2009 13:20 • Заявить о нарушении
The world is changing. Imagine how people of the past would comprehend something like that.
Vielen Dank
Юрий Лазирко 06.02.2009 17:36 Заявить о нарушении
Vielen Dank
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