Farewell till next time

What’s happening to me tonight?
No wish to live, no strength to fight
Hard to except that you are dead
“Don’t need no one…no one instead.”
You asked me to continue live
I stared at you in disbelief
Cause even after you are fallen
I’m crying out, I keep on calling
Part of my soul, you, my best friend
You said: “It’s just a start, it’s not the end.
Can’t you see immortal bounds?
Can’t you hear those beating sounds?
It’s the beating of one heart
Of two spirits that will never be apart.
I’ll stay in shadow of your light…”
“Without you my days are night!”
I walk around like a ghost,
I feel betrayed, forgotten, lost.
I’m dying now, I can’t let go
I’m like a child that I’ve been so many years ago.
But there will never be “goodbye”
One day I’ll find you standing by…


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"I’ll stay in shadow of your light…”"

эта строчка мне понравилась больше всего. Здоровский стих. As expected of you.

Никита Смирнов   20.04.2007 17:10     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you,Nik! I'm really glad you like it:) But why "As expected of you"?

Best wishes, Marina

Марина Фордвэкс   22.04.2007 10:26   Заявить о нарушении
because you're an outstanding poet, your works are real masterpieces ^_^

Никита Смирнов   07.05.2007 22:09   Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for such kind words, kinda made me blush :)

Best wishes, Marina

Марина Фордвэкс   12.05.2007 18:56   Заявить о нарушении
Wow! Hope so ^_^

best regards, Nick

Никита Смирнов   17.05.2007 16:52   Заявить о нарушении
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