Wanderer

Just a wanderer in freezing night
Just as frozen as sparkling stars
Just as sharp as the blade of knife
Just a stranger so close and so far

Walking fast on the razor's edge
In the murky false dawn haze
Beyond hope being out of range
With the hungry heart beating in blaze

Just a glimmer of cold light
Just a singer without song
Just a wanderer in freezing night
Just a stranger with frozen soul


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He's just a walker, no aim,
He's not a "catcher in the rye"...
He says hello, no answer claim,
A frozen look... he's passing by.
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So far everything I've read of your's impresses me really.
Thank you a lot.

My respect,

Андрей Молебсо   06.07.2008 20:30     Заявить о нарушении
Thank YOU very much for this wonderful improvisation!

I'm so glad you liked my verses!

My best regards,

Елена Колосовская   11.08.2008 11:00   Заявить о нарушении
Welcome, any time!:)
Please YOU do not mention any "thanks".:)
I'm just saying what I feel.

My best wishes to YOU,

Андрей Молебсо   14.08.2008 03:31   Заявить о нарушении