what means to live?

You had passed through so many things
You believed people you’ve ever meet
You are strong; you can’t just give it up
I understand how it’s hard- not to stop
You know as no one else what means to lose
Don’t be afraid what it’s wrong you’ve choose


You think that no one can understands
Don’t you ever thought here could be your friends?
You feel that all they’re doing is a haunt
Don’t just think they want break you down
 If you are ready to be as you were strong
You should be ready to be forever along



Tell what you wish- now it’s your chance
Now the heaven sent to you gifts
The whole world is in your hands
But even you don’t know what means to live


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думаю стоит боратить немного внимания на знаки препинания и грамматику....
А так- SUPER!!!

Дианочка Евгеньевна   23.03.2007 15:57     Заявить о нарушении
это старое и я ничего не исправляла, а вообщ МЕРСИ!!!!)))

Варона Гриль   24.03.2007 23:44   Заявить о нарушении