The day of the punishment

The blood of the blind
The black of the white
The feel of the touch
The pain is so much

The rules of the fear
The control of the tears
The day of the night
The true or the lied


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The light and the sight
I see it ... alright
I did drop no tear
Heck, man, rhyme is near...


...
But what does it mean?
(The sense is quite dim)
What's that you've to say
In yours poem's way?

Озорнин Прохор Николаевич   25.02.2007 15:10     Заявить о нарушении
Если Вы сразу не поняли, то и не поймете вообще.

Мариночка Михайлова   25.02.2007 19:09   Заявить о нарушении
Oh, what a pity !
I'll then ask my deity
And he'll sure shed some light
So we don't need to start a fight

Озорнин Прохор Николаевич   26.02.2007 10:07   Заявить о нарушении
you must die, i wanna this,
oh, you shouldn`t piss,
put one bullet in your gun,
and loudly shout RUUUUNNNN!!!

Паруччик Ржеффский   31.03.2007 00:24   Заявить о нарушении