Sooner or later... My dark side

Федор Клочков
Sooner or later… I know I will make you mine
Drunk with your tears sweetest truth, such enchaining wine
Courage will help you to erase your name
Enslaved by the ocean of hopes turned to pain

One day you’ll come to me, tightly embraced we’ll fall
Stray in the mire where no one will hear your call
And you’ll forget taste of joy filled with sorrow
Lost in the past you won’t see your tomorrow


© Copyright: Федор Клочков, 2007
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Excellent verse! Some of these lines are brilliant and my favorite is "Drunk with your tears sweetest truth, such enchaining wine." I had to catch myself because at first sight I wanted to read it "enchanting" which is highly overworked in poetry...excellent word choice! The only thing I can add is that in the 2nd line you need a comma after "truth." Beautifully written and it was a pleasure to read......Hugs Sue

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Glad to read it. Thank you very much.
Yours Feudor

Федор Клочков   14.05.2007 00:01   Заявить о нарушении
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