You are an angel from above
Who's sent to help me understand
Myself, the others, pure love:
Which are so hard to comprehend.
You are a messenger of hope,
Who brought me back my faith.
When I was rolling down the slope
Unseeing all my fears to face.
You are so perfect unaware,
That healing comes with pain
But you are Here and I'm not There:
All what was done is not in vain.
An Angel
© Copyright: Sergel Craze, 2007
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It's quite good. I like it much but the fifth line seems to sound better with the article previous to the word "messenger". But it's just my point of view.
Best wishes
Ксения Скворцова 13.02.2007 16:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Best wishes
Ксения Скворцова 13.02.2007 16:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for the valuable remark, how could I miss it!?
Sergel Craze 19.02.2007 06:19 Заявить о нарушении
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