Because I Need You

I just can't hide this simple truth :-))))

BECAUSE I NEED YOU
(Lyrics by Curtis Ayles)

Oh, what a pleasant night that I’ve got by your side
You’ve captured all my thoughts and made me lose my mind
I wanna be with you to watch your angel smile
I cherish every dream of you and now I find

Girl, I believe you look so beautiful tonight
When tender light can touch my eyes I find an answer
And all the time I keep you deep inside my heart
Because I need you, because I need you

I’ve wasted many days in search of some reply
I’ve spent a lot of time, these things I can’t deny
I’ve tried to find the truth and been around the world
But it’s been always close and now I really know

I do believe you look so beautiful tonight
When tender light can touch my eyes I find an answer
And all the time I keep you deep inside my heart
Because I need you, because I need you

So, let me say to you each one may rise and fall
Without you by my side my life’s no sense at all
Let’s break the walls between ourselves to pass ‘em thru’
That’s what I want to say that’s what we’re gonna do
And now I say to you

Girl, I believe you look so beautiful tonight
When tender light can touch my eyes I find an answer
And all the time I keep you deep inside my heart
Because I need you, because I need you

And all the time I keep you deep inside my heart
Because I need you, I really need you


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"And, baby, you're so wonderful tonight".
(c) Eric Clapton.

Yes, a beautiful poem for a wonderful woman. Everything is banal up there, but is pleasant to be read. Unfortunately, our speech always sounds simple and trivial when we speak of strong feelings.

The only thing that this poem of yours lacks is, honestly, brevity. You're making no headway when claiming of your simple strong feeling during 26 lines. :)

With best regards,
Darkfall.

Сергей Горенкин   16.02.2007 22:51     Заявить о нарушении
I guess that music is missing to finalize it and make it better :-))))
Thank you for your fair comments

With best regards,
Curtis

Кертис Эйлес   16.02.2007 23:23   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 3 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.