It was just a verse, an instant, a flash
Despite my lonely days
It was just a moment I was in mad dash
That’s all, there is nothing to face.
Believe me, that’s all, there is nothing to ask,
There is nothing that could be explained
You did not complete your terrible task,
My soul is still free ‘cause you failed.
Among those songs I’ve written and sing
Don’t know what’s wrong and what’s true
It was like you tried to make me think
That I was in love with you
Flash
© Copyright: Мирра Л -Английский, 2007
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Looking through my notes I've discovered it...
Yesterday they had their start
Tomorrow they will grow apart
Love's blackout lasted just the day
Bright flash and all's fading away
Happy lovers do think they know each other
They do not know themselves for real
Youth ambitions turn vicious to delicious
And back again rising degree...
English lines inspite me. Almost every time I'm connected with it I'm starting to create melodies in my head.
Sincerely yours.
Федор Клочков 15.02.2007 17:17 • Заявить о нарушении
Yesterday they had their start
Tomorrow they will grow apart
Love's blackout lasted just the day
Bright flash and all's fading away
Happy lovers do think they know each other
They do not know themselves for real
Youth ambitions turn vicious to delicious
And back again rising degree...
English lines inspite me. Almost every time I'm connected with it I'm starting to create melodies in my head.
Sincerely yours.
Федор Клочков 15.02.2007 17:17 • Заявить о нарушении
I like it! It’s very good! If you can create melodies, you are really lucky!
Unlike me, ‘cause I hear music inside my soul and have no way to get it out there.
Best wishes,
Tanya
Мирра Л -Английский 17.02.2007 15:38 Заявить о нарушении
Unlike me, ‘cause I hear music inside my soul and have no way to get it out there.
Best wishes,
Tanya
Мирра Л -Английский 17.02.2007 15:38 Заявить о нарушении
Inside the depth of soul sometimes I have an insight but my mynd it's like
a jeweller: without his work others can't see the internal beauty.
Федор Клочков 17.02.2007 18:09 Заявить о нарушении
a jeweller: without his work others can't see the internal beauty.
Федор Клочков 17.02.2007 18:09 Заявить о нарушении
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