I. When I wake up and it’s pouring
Music’s not so far away
It reminds me every morning
That the best day is today.
Chorus:
Looking back I’m trying high
To remember something fine
Had it happened in my life?
Questions hurt me like a knife.
II. I’ve been thinking for a long time
I’ve been trying really hard
I’ve been looking for a song that
Would have promised a good start.
Chorus
III. Now I feel that something’s coming
I will change there is no doubt.
I’m trying to solve my problems
I can’t yet see the way out.
IV. People try to do their best and
Not to think about the past,
But the memories about it
Won’t disappear so fast. Chorus. The End.
12.09.2002 Cambridge, UK
The Distance
© Copyright: Елена Слепушкина, 2006
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Rather well done, I should admit.
I have noticed a duplication in the III paragraph.
The word "out" had been repeated and that does not sound nice.
I guess there is some room to improve that without the loss of meaning.
Ex: "Now I feel that something’s coming
I will change there is no doubt.
I’m trying to solve my problems
I can’t yet see the way out."
Best of good luck!
Sagittarius 25.04.2016 13:40 • Заявить о нарушении
I have noticed a duplication in the III paragraph.
The word "out" had been repeated and that does not sound nice.
I guess there is some room to improve that without the loss of meaning.
Ex: "Now I feel that something’s coming
I will change there is no doubt.
I’m trying to solve my problems
I can’t yet see the way out."
Best of good luck!
Sagittarius 25.04.2016 13:40 • Заявить о нарушении