I want to die

Aweful Axe s Man

I want to die.
She’ll never come.
SHE’LL NEVER COME!!!
I mean to die.

What do all words should do, should I?
There are,
I mean,
That there, may be,
I mean,
Somewhere,
I mean,
Not here,
I mean,
There are heavens.

Not for me.
Please,
Heavens’re not for me.
I want to burn.
I mean to burn
And I was born
To burn.

No sky…

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wish to die
as burning lie
faces the ego...

glad to meet someone
who tries himself in english

best wishes of becoming free from ego
http://www.stihi.ru/2006/10/07-241

Аутинсайдер 01.11.2006 01:32 • Заявить о нарушении

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Well, thanks, brother-in-pen. But why you use "ego" where using of "self" seems more preferable? & don't you thing that everyone needs him- or herself in composing process? Can anyone write or something without self? Poetry's always selfish.

Aweful Axe s Man 01.11.2006 06:06 Заявить о нарушении

if all poetry were selfish, self-digging and egocentric - there would be no space to improve...
i think that poetry comes inside from somewhere and while reading it (after some period of time) one can see oneself from outside and understand a bit more that he isn't his ego - he's someone else...
maybe this could be an example:
http://www.stihi.ru/2006/10/07-253
and maybe this russian one:
http://www.stihi.ru/2006/10/06-207

sincerely

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