core

i see blue glasses of my eyes
who's the person, who's care dies
why compromise
why lies
there's myself, the someone in the door
the way is shut, the frame is locked
i see the blood, dissonance accord
my life is held by nothing more
no aim, no struggle in the fore
muscles are softened and life is bore
the brain feels pain
what is the core?!
of me...


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I must admit my own mistakes,
The cruelty of choice.
I must not raise for feeling's sake
The sword of blaming voice.

The breath of dragon lies within,
The thunder and the storm.
I let it out, it goes unseen,
It crawls like sneaking worm.

Then, in the single blink of eyes,
All what was built's destroyed.
Knocked down by simpliest device -
A word of angry void.

©Dhoaras McDunnan

Вот это - английский. А не...

Анна Фокси   07.10.2006 01:38     Заявить о нарушении
спасибо за красивое стихотворение McDunnan
каждый имеет право выражать свои мысли как хочет,
но не мешая при этом другим

как сказал Леонардо да Винчи: "Цитировать глупо" =)

Аутинсайдер   07.10.2006 01:57   Заявить о нарушении