be free

give me the remedy for love
i can't stand it anymore
i flied too high above
the real life and saw...
nothing!
but my own
imagination...

i'm afraid of Love
i'm afraid of Truth
take away the fear from my heart
take away it like a bad black tooth

what is Love?
what is it?

face it – i'm strong enough
feel it – with my open soul
grace – what do i need to love
appeal – i want to hear its call


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I didn't get this one well. But I am disapointed for a bit. I cann't feel English well enough to write complicated poems. But... Sometimes. So that try yourself.

Aweful Axe s Man   01.11.2006 06:11     Заявить о нарушении
i see...
anyway - thank you for visiting me and sharing urself
i invite u to read some other poems of mine from the selection "awakening" - the old one (2003) - i think there u can find rather understandable texts =) enjoy

sincerely urs

Аутинсайдер   02.11.2006 01:22   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.