Something is wrong

Imagination, frustration, collapse
All these words are about us
We are together, but something is wrong

We don`t care to whom we are belonged
Life is surprise, we are in siege
We don` t know who is the next

Something is behind us,
sorrow of soul, love and collapse?
we don `t know,
that is all about us.

No idea where to be,
I don` t know how to live.
Suffering, loving and being along
life is complete, but something is wrong


 

Simona
6 July 2006


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What was wrong? What was true?
Anywhere and nobody knew!

With wishes of happiness, tenderness and love,

Tim Autumn

Тим Осенний   10.07.2006 21:37     Заявить о нарушении
Love is true,
life is wrong! But I know who I belonged too!

My mood was strange when I wrote it, so...

Симона К Нет   11.07.2006 20:53   Заявить о нарушении
Lovely, as I am glad to read your lines, I am ready to kiss each letter of your message! Really you slightly belong also to me?

With deep tenderness,

Tim Autumn

Тим Осенний   12.07.2006 09:47   Заявить о нарушении
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