Gimme A Piece Of The Action

This is what usually happens to a man when he gets tired of being alone :-))))

GIMME A PIECE OF THE ACTION
(Lyrics by Curtis Ayles)

Uh, come on

I’m sick and tired of my lonely days
I’m gonna change it and take brand new ways
You’ve got me fed up with boring TV shows
I’ll write a song for you to hear it on the radio
Give me the biggest piece of the action
Give me the sweetest slice of the pie
Let’s add warm colors to this faceless world
And fan the flame in your tired soul
Love is a medicine for all broken hearts
Let’s keep them open waiting for good times
Give me the biggest piece of the action
Give me the sweetest slice of the pie
Here blows the wild wind of good changes
God knows we will never say die

Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words
Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words

Oh, it’s getting out of control
WOW

Unlock your feelings and free your mind
Don’t hide emotions, let your dreams unwind
And in addition you’ve got me hungry for love
I want to move on because I can’t get enough
Give me the biggest piece of this action
Give me the sweetest slice of the pie
Let me play the role of a love madman
God knows that I never say die

Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words
Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words

Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words
I want to say to you
Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words
You’ve got me missing it
Gimme a piece of the action
Real action instead of empty words

I want to stay in a tight contact with your body
Oh, I really like it and want to do it all the night


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I would change this line "Love is a medicine for all broken hearts" to the line "Good sex is a medicine for all broken hearts". Maybe not for this poem, but in general.
It just sound more realistic to me.)))

Mirra L

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   19.05.2006 21:15     Заявить о нарушении
Yeah, why not :-))) But in order to keep the rhythm of the line you should say just S"ex is a medicine for all broken hearts"

Does it sound better to you? :-)))

With best wishes,
Curtis

Кертис Эйлес   22.05.2006 12:14   Заявить о нарушении
It's good enough actually :-))))

Кертис Эйлес   22.05.2006 15:37   Заявить о нарушении
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