bout you

Heart of flowers and crime,

Eyes of haze and so much more.

I'd compare to sunrise

Beauty of the girl, I saw.

 

Tiny dent in brown break,

Bite to eat on Thompson street.

Juices, coffee, teas and water.

All the man and woman need.

 

Hours later, hand in hand

Love in tow city walk,

Talk is cheap but chatter's sweet,

No one wins, and no one scores.

 

Crimson name of thorny bloom,

Who will buy and who will sell?

Blessed child or wretched offspring?

Is there any way to tell?

 

Who are you my charming maven?

Something speaks I know you,

Time to lips, whilst am to savor,

Coffee, teas and dйjа vu.


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very fresh and breathing! full of light and brings a lot of positive emotions...nice!

Эльгиль   02.06.2008 07:37     Заявить о нарушении
Merci! Just remembered - Spring & Thompson (80 Thompson Street) --- best chocolates in the universe http://www.keeschocolates.com when I lived there - that was my forepost of taste choco :)

Fern   03.06.2008 14:22   Заявить о нарушении
haha! thanks! what a nice place to live=))) i'll go there soon im sure!

Эльгиль   03.06.2008 19:48   Заявить о нарушении
...and a very clever cafe 'Thompson' , where the object of my adoration was encountered, is just down the street - it has only few tables but the setting and the vibe are whole and of inspiration :) if you go to Kee’s and see her, she usually works there herself, please send her regards from Sergey, former neighbor :)

Best!

Fern   03.06.2008 22:32   Заявить о нарушении
wow...i definitely will! i'll let you know then! =))

Эльгиль   03.06.2008 23:10   Заявить о нарушении
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