Slowly Has To Fade

Without love she is like a flower that slowly has to fade.....

SLOWLY HAS TO FADE (Without Love)
(Lyrics by Curtis Ayles)

She’s still waiting for her baby
She can’t dream without him right by her side
Words he whispered to this lady
You’re all what I’ve got
Living deep in my heart
I would dry every tear that you cried
When your love is strong
Nothing can go wrong
You are not alone, you’re not alone tonight

But without love she slowly has to fade
Without love she fades away and wastes all her lifetime
Living in my dreams she knows what it seems
It’s more than meets the eye
Without love she slowly has to die

She’s so broken feeling lonely
She believes love will find her lonely heart
When the moon gets higher I will be your fire
To give all what you need
Holding on to my creed
We were born to be there together
‘Cause if your love is strong
Nothing can go wrong
You are not alone, you’re not alone tonight

But without love she slowly has to fade
Without love she fades away and wastes all her lifetime
Living in my dreams she knows what it seems
It’s more than meets the eye
Without love she slowly has to die

When your love is strong
Nothing can go wrong
You are not alone, you’re not alone tonight

But without love she slowly has to fade
Without love she fades away and wastes all her lifetime
Living in my dreams she knows what it seems
It’s more than meets the eye
Without love she slowly has to die


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"You’re not alone tonight" - words of someone who are looking love for a night. It sounds like that. Nothing in common with love.
"Without love she slowly has to die" - that's true and not true at the same time, because it depends what we mean saying "love".
I would agree with that only if it does not mean love to the guy, I guess that's what it meant here, but I understand LOVE is a more general conseption, LOVE is LIFE. It's everything around us, that changes constantly, it's our feelings and feelings of other people, it's our World, whatever it is.
Only thinking this way I can say that without love she has to die, because LOVE is her life. That's what it is!)))
She can not live without love in this sense, but che easily can live without a particular guy...I think so)))

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   17.05.2006 21:27     Заявить о нарушении
I guess that you took this too deep or even deeper than I meant to say. While reading your lines I got a feel that you are afraid of love for a man or something of this kind. The fact is that we are looking for love and this search takes us so far but actually it's always somewhere around maybe just 2 steps behind........

I do believe that without love a woman fades away and really wastes her time. No matter what you say in defence this is a fact that you can't change

With best wishes,
Curtis

Кертис Эйлес   18.05.2006 10:34   Заявить о нарушении
Of course, I can not change what you really believe in...
At least, I may try to argue... but saying what you said you leave no hope for lonelly girls.

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   18.05.2006 16:01   Заявить о нарушении
Next thing I would like to ask you, what about a man without love? As you said about a woman, I can conclude that she is nothing without love to a man, she does not have a right to live on her own and be happy on her own...
I agree that usually love is somewhere around us, but there are situations when you have absolutely nothing around...

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   18.05.2006 23:01   Заявить о нарушении
I suppose that every person has a chance. The problem is to try it and not to be afraid of people say :-)))
As per a point of a man I can say that there is a song performed by Michael Bolton (if I'm right) where he sings that man is nothing without a woman.
As for me I can say that women inspire me and my desire to possess is a kind of a fuel that makes my heart beat like a drum. :-)))))
And when the night comes down...... (you can imagine) :-)))))

With best regards,
Curtis

Кертис Эйлес   19.05.2006 10:51   Заявить о нарушении
As for me, I found out from my past experience that I don’t need inspiration by real people, inspiration for my poems, they inspired by dreams, by screen heroes, by my own negative emotions (Like the poem “The morning without me” was inspired by new rejection in job search, I am sure you won’t believe this!)
I used to write love lyrics for a particular guy, and I still remember how hurtful it was…
I think that the difference between a man and a woman lies in the fact that a woman-poet can find inspiration in her dreams, but a man-poet needs someone real…
I guess so)))
Also as inspiration can work some unserious emotions that look like love, but do not include the worst side of love. That works for me too.

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   19.05.2006 12:02   Заявить о нарушении
She, she's so afraid to kiss, she's so afraid to laugh
She used to hide behind her mask, she does it all the time
Is it about you?

With best regards,
Curtis

Кертис Эйлес   19.05.2006 15:13   Заявить о нарушении
Not exactly, I am not afraid to kiss, I am not afraid to laugh, but I am afraid to do all of that with deep feeling in my heart. Do you see the difference?
I am not afraid it if I have only instantaneous feelings and will be able to forget about this tomorrow with no problems. With no suffering. But I really don’t want anything serious that will make me suffer tomorrow.
In other words, I am for sex for one night and for illusion of emotional closeness between two people.

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   19.05.2006 15:30   Заявить о нарушении
Not exactly, I am not afraid to kiss, I am not afraid to laugh, but I am afraid to do all of that with deep feeling in my heart. Do you see the difference?
I am not afraid it if I have only instantaneous feelings and will be able to forget about this tomorrow with no problems. With no suffering. But I really don’t want anything serious that will make me suffer tomorrow.
In other words, I am for sex for one night and for illusion of emotional closeness between two people.

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   19.05.2006 15:33   Заявить о нарушении
You are so hungry just for one night stand
You want to put me into your wonderland.......

Anyhow sex makes you feel relaxed and it takes your cares away
P.S. It works :-)))

Кертис Эйлес   19.05.2006 17:15   Заявить о нарушении
God knows as well :-))

Кертис Эйлес   22.05.2006 12:11   Заявить о нарушении
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