This one is a pearl. I mean that it presents an episode from our everyday life ;-)))
Sometimes it seems to me a scene from family life ;-))))
JANE
(Lyrics by Curtis Ayles)
Jane, I hear you crying if I’m not at home at night
You know I’ve to be out but in thoughts I’m at your side
All these waiting hours seem like hell without you
My Jane, I hear you crying but look I miss you too
Jane, I’m missing you
Life seems always empty without love inside our home
I know you’re left all to yourself and face this night alone
All these waiting hours seem like hell without you
My Jane, I hear you crying but look I miss you too
Jane, I’m missing you
When the night comes falling and you’re lonely in the night
God knows I will be near I’m here at your side
I’ve got you always on my mind
Jane
© Copyright: Кертис Эйлес, 2005
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Nice poem! But the situation how it was described is too funny to be true, I mean if I would be Jane, I would not believe to words like these ones :)))
Best wishes,
Mirra L
Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82 10.04.2006 01:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Best wishes,
Mirra L
Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82 10.04.2006 01:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Do you know that we like to believe what we desire? :-)))
With best wishes,
Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 11.04.2006 08:30 Заявить о нарушении
With best wishes,
Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 11.04.2006 08:30 Заявить о нарушении
Well, that's true, but not always. )))
Sometimes, life makes us to see this world from the realistic point of view, and this is not always desirable, but we have to live in the real world, not in our dreams. Of course, we can live in our dreams for a while, but that never ends good.
Best wishes!
Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82 11.04.2006 15:02 Заявить о нарушении
Sometimes, life makes us to see this world from the realistic point of view, and this is not always desirable, but we have to live in the real world, not in our dreams. Of course, we can live in our dreams for a while, but that never ends good.
Best wishes!
Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82 11.04.2006 15:02 Заявить о нарушении
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