Don't
Tell me what's in
Tell me how to write
Don't tell me how to win
This fight
Isn't your life
It isn't your right
To take the only thing that's
Mine
Proven over time
It's over your head
Don't try to read between the
Lines
Are clearly defined
Never lose sight of
Something you believe in
Still
Running uphill
Swimming against the current
I wish I didn't feel like
Marked
Feels like I'm stuck
Lost in a sea
Of mediocrity
Slow down,
You're thinking too much
Where is your soul?
You cannot touch the way I
Play
Or tell me what to say
You're in the way
Of all that I believe in
Don t
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That’s great! The form of the verse is interesting and adds intensity to the idea.
Listen to no one –
shrine what you believe in
Let nobody shackle your soul
The path is not trodden,
Yet free as you are now
You follow the way of your own
With best regards
Mia
Миа Могилевская 04.01.2006 02:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Listen to no one –
shrine what you believe in
Let nobody shackle your soul
The path is not trodden,
Yet free as you are now
You follow the way of your own
With best regards
Mia
Миа Могилевская 04.01.2006 02:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanx, Mia. =)) Sorry for so long silence.
with warmth
Het
Хэтфилд 16.02.2006 16:43 Заявить о нарушении
with warmth
Het
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