D'you know? Sandra is a cat,
That wears a small and yellow hat.
She doesn't like a yellow rat,
That has it's own yellow head.
D'you know? Spurky is a dog.
His friend - a little yellow frog.
My name is Yellow Verywell,
I have a little merry bell.
My friends are Spurky, yellow dog,
Who loves a little yellow frog.
And Sandra, little yellow cat,
That hates a rat without hat.
Yellow Verywell
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D'you know? Sandra is a cat,
That wearS A SMALL AND yellow hat.
She doesn't like a yellow rat,
That haSn't IT"S own yellow head.(HAT?!!)
OR: That has it's own yellow hat. ??
D'you know? Spurky is a dog.
His friend - a little yellow frog.
My name'S A Yellow Verywell,
I have a little merry bell.
My friends are Spurky, yellow dog,
Who loves a little yellow frog,
And Sandra, little yellow cat,
That hates a rat without head.
Yours,
sincerely
Борис Рубежов -Вторая Страница 11.08.2006 18:18 • Заявить о нарушении
That wearS A SMALL AND yellow hat.
She doesn't like a yellow rat,
That haSn't IT"S own yellow head.(HAT?!!)
OR: That has it's own yellow hat. ??
D'you know? Spurky is a dog.
His friend - a little yellow frog.
My name'S A Yellow Verywell,
I have a little merry bell.
My friends are Spurky, yellow dog,
Who loves a little yellow frog,
And Sandra, little yellow cat,
That hates a rat without head.
Yours,
sincerely
Борис Рубежов -Вторая Страница 11.08.2006 18:18 • Заявить о нарушении
I am impressed with your attention to my poems! :o)
As for this poem I only don't agree with the article "a"
before Yellow Verywell.
For example, will you say "a Natasha"? But I think that it is your mechanical mistake, isn't it?
Thank you for your visit very much! I always glad to see you on my page.
Regards,
Наталья Романова Луганск 11.08.2006 18:47 Заявить о нарушении
As for this poem I only don't agree with the article "a"
before Yellow Verywell.
For example, will you say "a Natasha"? But I think that it is your mechanical mistake, isn't it?
Thank you for your visit very much! I always glad to see you on my page.
Regards,
Наталья Романова Луганск 11.08.2006 18:47 Заявить о нарушении
That's not the point, miss! Rememeber THE United States, but: Germany!
The world "yellow" makes your proper name "Verywell" a common noun.
Yours,
Борис Рубежов -Вторая Страница 12.08.2006 03:11 Заявить о нарушении
The world "yellow" makes your proper name "Verywell" a common noun.
Yours,
Борис Рубежов -Вторая Страница 12.08.2006 03:11 Заявить о нарушении