Through the fog and people's noise
I try to find his rescuing voice
I try to say that I'm alright
But I can't help but cry tonight
"Wake up, forget, give up" - I hear
From closest people who are near -
"You're very strange, your life is wrong,
Don't listen to this stupid song"
I turn my head and looking down
I dream to leave this evil town
I close my eyes and save my faith
In him, in things which he makes great
Why does it hurt me? - I will ask
And put on my face my usual mask
And only by the distant part of brain
I will be dream and live again
I'll see his dear eyes and face
I'll feel myself on favourite place
And I don't care of things they say
I love to love him while I look for my own way...
Invisible Spark
© Copyright: Фиона Робертс, 2005
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Yes, it's a good piece of poetry. Wish you keep going in the same way
With best regards, Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 11.10.2005 12:04 • Заявить о нарушении
With best regards, Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 11.10.2005 12:04 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks so much! I'm gonna post another one right now.
Do you write in English only?
Фиона Робертс 12.10.2005 15:45 Заявить о нарушении
Do you write in English only?
Фиона Робертс 12.10.2005 15:45 Заявить о нарушении
Put it into the other words. Maybe like this "I want to listen to your body language". ;-))))
Кертис Эйлес 14.10.2005 10:32 Заявить о нарушении
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