When you have nothing to say,
When you can't find your own way,
When someone tells you just lie,
You should simply die.
Without any hope for tomorrow,
That fact makes me so sorrow.
Recalling success of my past
Like blowing away ancient dust
I cry for the darkness of future
Like tormenting my brain suture.
Absorption is everywhere.
It's surrounding me,
I can't resist. It's there...
Desperate. I'm desperate.
I've nothing to lose.
Every attempt is a chance.
Desperate
© Copyright: Александр Смит, 2005
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Don't be so sad my dear friend! The show must go on as i suppose that you know ;)))
By the way please check the 3rd line (talks you just lie)
I would recommend you to change talk to tell (it will be better I guess from language point of view)
Have a nice day! Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 27.09.2005 10:05 • Заявить о нарушении
By the way please check the 3rd line (talks you just lie)
I would recommend you to change talk to tell (it will be better I guess from language point of view)
Have a nice day! Curtis
Кертис Эйлес 27.09.2005 10:05 • Заявить о нарушении
Hi, Curtis! Thanks for your advice. I'll keep it in my mind.
Александр Смит 30.09.2005 22:25 Заявить о нарушении
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