Forever Yours

Диана Силантьева

I can give you somewhat crazy,
Something new, fantastic, lazy.
Every time I feel your touch
I can’t help myself so much

Being passionate and loving.
You’re the one I’ve been adoring
For so many lengthy years.
And I’ll be forever yours.

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I can give you somewhat crazy,
Something new, fantastic, lazy.
Every time I feel your touch
I can’t help myself so much

*BUT*

Being passionate and loving.
You’re the one I’ve been adoring
For so many lengthy years.
And I’ll be forever yours.

Any missing line/ word? :)

"help myself so much Being" - did not match any documents. (google)

Сергей Лузан 30.08.2005 15:59 • Заявить о нарушении

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Sincerely Yours :)

Сергей Лузан 30.08.2005 16:00 Заявить о нарушении

Well... I don't think I should argufy. :) These lines are just verses... I don't speak about any documents. :) Have you've ever heard English verses or even Russian?! It's such a mess sometimes! :)
As to "can't help doing something" = "keep from", "refrain from". Just compare: he couldn't help laughing, he couldn't refrain from laughing (ABBYY Lingvo 7.0 and different textbooks). :)
Sincerely, Diana :)

Диана Силантьева 31.08.2005 13:55 Заявить о нарушении

But anyway thank you for your personal opinion. :)

Диана Силантьева 31.08.2005 13:59 Заявить о нарушении

Well, let's stick to your rendition ... :) (on afterthought 'but' sounds a bit out-of-date and requires infinitive, not gerund - my fault, or, even better, slip of the memory when skipping from one line onto another). Excuse my disturbing
Regards

Сергей Лузан 31.08.2005 14:32 Заявить о нарушении

Typo - Have you** ever heard...
Of course, I have. It's not such a mess as it might seem, and has it's internal order anyway.

Сергей Лузан 31.08.2005 16:01 Заявить о нарушении

Sergei, thank your for understanding and especially thank you for criticism. :) Both of these are equally significant for me. :)
With the best regards, Diana

Диана Силантьева 31.08.2005 16:26 Заявить о нарушении

Thanks for the opinion, Диана Мастюкова! I felt touch of the poetry in your lines. Quite pleasant, indeed.

Сергей Лузан 01.09.2005 00:41 Заявить о нарушении

:)

Диана Силантьева 01.09.2005 14:13 Заявить о нарушении

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