To hear, to see,
To smell, to feel,
To taste, vibrating
With all sense organs rating
Love, most unreal,
It is ideal.
Mature Love
© Copyright: Виктор П.С., 2005
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Did you know, there is not such a thing as ideal love??? Just like dreams come true only when there is something wrong with them. Such is life... Good poem.
Миловидова Екатерина 30.08.2005 05:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Миловидова Екатерина 30.08.2005 05:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much, Kate! Very good point. When I named it "ideal" I meant complete, since all human organs of perception are involved. And each is a source of vital information for a human being. Do you imagine what abyss of information is exchanged? Too much for consciousness to percept. So only the feeling of pleasure remains noticed. And later, when reason interferes, this is the end of love. As to dreams coming true - they are always differing from expectations. In both cases this is due to narrow limits of our reason. We are overestimating its capabilities. At least that's what I think of it.
Most sincerely yours,
Виктор П.С. 31.08.2005 18:35 Заявить о нарушении
Most sincerely yours,
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