Two Women in Love - two swans

Two women in love - two swans,
Holding each other's arms.
Women like Ars Amandi (Lat.)
Finally happiness found.

The Art of Love and four wings -
Two delicate birds in one link:
"Let's swim together, - said one, -
Please join me, my dear swan!"

The blue varnish of sky
Went down, unchained night...
Two muses in bodies of swans
Continued to play and have fun.

Then, they slept on the shore.
Until sunrise! - Their love was there...
They wanted it more, and more, and more!
The morning was nice, and summer was warm...


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Two women in love - two swans,
Holding each other's arms.
Women like Ars Amandi (Lat.)
Finally happiness found.

The Art of Love and four wings -
Two delicate birds in one link:
"Let's swim together, - said one, -
Please join me, my dear swan!"

The blue varnish of sky
Went down, unchained night...
Two muses in bodies of swans
Continued to play and have fun.

Then, they slept on the shore.
Until sunrise -
Their love was there. They wanted it more.
The summer was warm, and morning nice.



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Две женщины в любви,как пара лебедей
охватывают нежными руками сердца людей
и грезят Ars amandi
под музыку богов и с красным кьянти

Искусство их любви-крыла четыре,
двух нежных птиц, озябших в этом мире:
"Давай же вместе плыть при свете дня,
будь ласковой и обними меня!"

От этих слов светлеет гладь небес,
становится желанным крест
двум музам в теле белых птиц,
они плывут в весельи и не видят лиц,
которые глядят на них понуро,
оглядывая перья пары хмуро.

Не судите строго!

Андрей Кутуков   16.10.2005 01:55     Заявить о нарушении
Beautiful! Thank you, my dear friend! I love your translation! How unique each line is! Thank you!
Thank you! I am very happy:) I send my heart to you...
Love, Yani

Яни Сит   16.10.2005 03:22   Заявить о нарушении