How are you feeling?

Hold your breath in the emptiness,
Try to stay alive in my hell,
Stop keeping inside all the hopelessness,
Don't you know you were under a spell?
Life escapes through your fingers like rain,
Won't you hold it and bring in your soul?
We are killing all the feelings again,
Only to look like stronger and not to fall.
Who will be seeing in the mirror tomorrow?
For what all your hopes and dreams,
All your thoughts, all your joys and sorrows?
How are you feeling without your wings?


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Dark Keeper, I don't know exactly, but дыхание пишется "breath", without "e".

Tomorrow in mirror we'll find just reflection
Of someone who loved in another dirrection...

The love... Can't she be the part eternity?..

Неизвестник   07.08.2005 21:49     Заявить о нарушении
I'm so sorry)) I can speak English, but not very well) Thanks!
Part OF eternity, isn't it?)
Yes, it is..
I glad to see you!

Хранитель Тьмы   10.08.2005 20:22   Заявить о нарушении
I'm glad to see you, sorry)))

Хранитель Тьмы   10.08.2005 20:24   Заявить о нарушении
Вот поэтому я предпочитаю писать на русском. :)

Неизвестник   11.08.2005 09:39   Заявить о нарушении