You need not ask and pray advice from women,
She will not answer, will be only mute -
Like winds, which flies and sings without voice -
But roots and rocks - all know their silence.
You need not beg and pray advice from women,
Because she love you - and her every knowledge
Be full of passion - and you burn, still trying
To find there sense and memoirs, and truth.
You still are silent and not ask the question?
You are the fool and fun with women's heart,
And play by silence - so your way forever
Be solitude, and thirst and hot desert.
I love, and burn, and pray but could I recognize
Those words of passion, which give me true advise...
You need not ask and pray advice from women...
© Copyright: Игорь Пухов, 2005
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T'ank u, cutter. Ya're right, - only a few canny words have i learned over the years. And I write lines, trying not to build a cage from words.
;-)
But, of course, you were right.
Игорь Пухов 28.02.2006 14:50 Заявить о нарушении
;-)
But, of course, you were right.
Игорь Пухов 28.02.2006 14:50 Заявить о нарушении
Well, analizing foreign poetry it's noticable they're written in a very simple manner. But for classicals such as Shakespeare, that's not typical, of cource:
"...As an imperfect actor on the stage,
Who with his fear is put besides his part..."
There's always a choise: to write classically or in a simplified manner. Choosing to write classically is dangerous, as there could be some "cages of words", as you said.
But of course English is rather nice language to write in, I can just admire your courage!
Best Reguards,
Егоров Сергей 28.02.2006 23:35 Заявить о нарушении
"...As an imperfect actor on the stage,
Who with his fear is put besides his part..."
There's always a choise: to write classically or in a simplified manner. Choosing to write classically is dangerous, as there could be some "cages of words", as you said.
But of course English is rather nice language to write in, I can just admire your courage!
Best Reguards,
Егоров Сергей 28.02.2006 23:35 Заявить о нарушении
Course, course.
Glad me am, right you speak.
Of course, you were right. We always have the choice - not to write and learn the language. Making it perfect - and seal the tongue - it forces us to cry. To speak, to drop the paper. Soiles it by our stupid words.
But perfect language makes us free. And we can use it freely, without fear of misunderstanding.
This is the choice, is not it?
Игорь Пухов 01.03.2006 01:23 Заявить о нарушении
Glad me am, right you speak.
Of course, you were right. We always have the choice - not to write and learn the language. Making it perfect - and seal the tongue - it forces us to cry. To speak, to drop the paper. Soiles it by our stupid words.
But perfect language makes us free. And we can use it freely, without fear of misunderstanding.
This is the choice, is not it?
Игорь Пухов 01.03.2006 01:23 Заявить о нарушении
Yeap, you said it!
Anyway, the idea is very good, as foreign languages extend our mind, allow to see the things in different ways.
So, keep on and feel free to experiment!
Егоров Сергей 01.03.2006 22:16 Заявить о нарушении
Anyway, the idea is very good, as foreign languages extend our mind, allow to see the things in different ways.
So, keep on and feel free to experiment!
Егоров Сергей 01.03.2006 22:16 Заявить о нарушении