The stars at night float just to spell your name,
And birds of spring sing songs for you and i.
I know times change, but we can be the same.
You were and will be perfect to my eye…
Those simple words i whispered in your ear
Were heavy as a weightless word can be.
At least you know i’ll always be sincere,
And i believe you’ll always think of me.
Our life’s like stripes that change from white to black…
Soon there will come a time when you will leave,
But i’ll be waiting for you to come back.
I love you, sweetheart, that’s what i believe.
The only one
© Copyright: Шуйский, 2005
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Imagery is excellent. Yet in the second line of the first stanza must be "me" instead of "I." Maybe:
The stars at night float just to spell your name,
And birds of spring are singing sweet lie.
I know times change, but we can be the same.
You were and will be perfect to my eye…
Леон Татис 05.09.2005 05:29 • Заявить о нарушении
The stars at night float just to spell your name,
And birds of spring are singing sweet lie.
I know times change, but we can be the same.
You were and will be perfect to my eye…
Леон Татис 05.09.2005 05:29 • Заявить о нарушении
The english language allows such things as i did ;)
Thank you for reading my poem.
Шуйский 15.09.2005 01:40 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for reading my poem.
Шуйский 15.09.2005 01:40 Заявить о нарушении
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