Iv never met a friend
Iv never been alone
Iv never had a dad
Iv never was afraid
What should I understand
In this silly life
To be the one
Who lives an honest life?
I want to feel the season changes
I need to be alive
My mind is full of majors
Useless for this life
paradox
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I feel I like it mo' than others. It's nice, very nice. Yet, I have a couple of ques-s 4U.
*I've never met a friend
I've never been alone*..
That's the only paradox I found here. Though, may B, it's just a little misunderstanding here. Tell me what do U meant, while writin' these words?
The other ques-n is: What is the paradox? I wonder I could find it myself.
P.S. - by the way, thanks 4 your review. :)))
Никодим Святославов 19.04.2005 23:27 • Заявить о нарушении
*I've never met a friend
I've never been alone*..
That's the only paradox I found here. Though, may B, it's just a little misunderstanding here. Tell me what do U meant, while writin' these words?
The other ques-n is: What is the paradox? I wonder I could find it myself.
P.S. - by the way, thanks 4 your review. :)))
Никодим Святославов 19.04.2005 23:27 • Заявить о нарушении
hi
as i feel it, the paradox is in every line! for me the main word in this poem is USELESS.
do YOU feel when winter goes into spring or when spring goes into summer?
i dont.
and unfortunatly i dont know how to change it.
your suggestions?
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 11:06 Заявить о нарушении
as i feel it, the paradox is in every line! for me the main word in this poem is USELESS.
do YOU feel when winter goes into spring or when spring goes into summer?
i dont.
and unfortunatly i dont know how to change it.
your suggestions?
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 11:06 Заявить о нарушении
hi
as i feel it, the paradox is in every line! for me the main word in this poem is USELESS.
do YOU feel when winter goes into spring or when spring goes into summer?
i dont.
and unfortunatly i dont know how to change it.
your suggestions?
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 11:07 Заявить о нарушении
as i feel it, the paradox is in every line! for me the main word in this poem is USELESS.
do YOU feel when winter goes into spring or when spring goes into summer?
i dont.
and unfortunatly i dont know how to change it.
your suggestions?
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 11:07 Заявить о нарушении
Hey! I just wanted 2 say that I couldn't imagine a person, who "never met a friend", but (at the same time) who "never been alone". That's the paradox, isn't it?
I totally agree wit' U about changin' seasons. I can't. Nobody can't, I believe. Though.... "ласточка с весною в сени к нам летит"... :)) May B they could feel it. And some other birds 2. I dunno, Swallow, I dunno...
Никодим Святославов 20.04.2005 14:43 Заявить о нарушении
I totally agree wit' U about changin' seasons. I can't. Nobody can't, I believe. Though.... "ласточка с весною в сени к нам летит"... :)) May B they could feel it. And some other birds 2. I dunno, Swallow, I dunno...
Никодим Святославов 20.04.2005 14:43 Заявить о нарушении
now u can say tjat u know a person who doesnt have a real friend, but is not alone, as i have a lot of aquentences with whom i have fun and who never leave me alone. but theres no friendship.
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 19:54 Заявить о нарушении
Первая Ласточка 20.04.2005 19:54 Заявить о нарушении
*I've* never met a friend
*I've* never been alone
*I've* never had a dad
*I've* never BEEN afraid.
TYPOS, again :)
Сергей Лузан 25.04.2005 16:54 Заявить о нарушении
*I've* never been alone
*I've* never had a dad
*I've* never BEEN afraid.
TYPOS, again :)
Сергей Лузан 25.04.2005 16:54 Заявить о нарушении
